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Nov 19, 2008
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Betting on the cloud cover
Anger clouds the young man's thoughts
and he makes the wrong decision...
Hey man, that bitch said I can't see my baby!
She said "this is my new man"
"now your baby has a dad"
...what was I supposed to do
so I took it to his ass
I didn't know he had a knife and couldn't fight
punk-ass-mother-fucker died
Now I'm doing seven years
and two more for being here
the shit comes to me
if I don't stop I'll never be free
so I'm waiting out my last year in a box
you see in here
the football game is us
if they hate you
they don't want your suffering to end
if they like you
they want you there watching
for them
hard to be middle of the road
when it's your time to go
that's when the betting begins
and the cloud usually wins
and he makes the wrong decision...
Hey man, that bitch said I can't see my baby!
She said "this is my new man"
"now your baby has a dad"
...what was I supposed to do
so I took it to his ass
I didn't know he had a knife and couldn't fight
punk-ass-mother-fucker died
Now I'm doing seven years
and two more for being here
the shit comes to me
if I don't stop I'll never be free
so I'm waiting out my last year in a box
you see in here
the football game is us
if they hate you
they don't want your suffering to end
if they like you
they want you there watching
for them
hard to be middle of the road
when it's your time to go
that's when the betting begins
and the cloud usually wins
— themoonman, Nov 19, 2008
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Critiques
Arrow
17 years 6 months ago
Loved it!
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Arrow...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
richard
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Jess...
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Seen a few like this
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
thanks Rett...
orgami
17 years 6 months ago
been there did something but not completely that
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Well then...
barbsdad2003
17 years 6 months ago
Poignant ...
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
All right....
Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
Betting
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Janice...
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Dawning...