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Reality and Pleasure
In our most deepest thoughts we see
realities of love and death in relation
to our art,
We attempt to portray these thoughts
into words that come from the heart,
Of fictional pleasures that are derived
from dreams that were expressed by
Keats and Yeats.
We dream of beautiful love and of
incredible loss, we use our pens to
unlock all these things behind the
minds gates,
We open the gates and let pain and
sorrow come flooding out,
and dance with death in the midnight
house,
We soar like birds upon our wings,
flying high into cumulus clouds,
We dive into oceans and seas to swim
with mermaids in warm clear water of
of our dreams,
But what of all these things,
As S. Freud said, “It was not I that found
the subconscious, but the poets”
So who do I write for, do I write for thee or
is it for me,
Do you see the pictures I try to express or
maybe I should just digress, I am loss in
Imagery and words that I try to address,
with out knowing of the greats I will never
be able to put into words what I really want
to express.
To my poet friends, your words have unlocked
love and also the hidden hell.
Poetry is like insanity.
Critiques
W.C.Wampler
17 years 6 months ago
Reality and pleasure poem
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
W.C.
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
HI MY DEAR POET FREN
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
HI MY DEAR POET FREN
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
HI MY DEAR POET FREN
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Zarul,
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
thank u eddie
Wafi
17 years 6 months ago
Cruz Thanks
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Wafi,
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
Good Poetry of poets
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Barbara,
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Rett,
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
Same here Eddie and Rett
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Barb,
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Janice,
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Patty,