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Reality and Pleasure

In our most deepest thoughts we see
realities of love  and death in relation
to our art,

We attempt to portray these thoughts
into words that come from the heart,

Of fictional pleasures that are derived
from dreams that were expressed by
Keats and Yeats.

 We dream of beautiful love and of
incredible loss, we use our pens to
unlock all these things behind the
minds gates, 
We open the gates and let pain and
sorrow come flooding out,

and dance with death in the midnight
house,

We soar like birds upon our wings,
flying high into cumulus clouds,

We dive into oceans and seas to swim
with mermaids in warm clear water of
of our dreams,

But what of all these things,

As S. Freud said, “It was not I that found
the subconscious, but the poets”

So who do I write for, do I write for thee or
is it for me,

Do you see the pictures I try to express or
maybe I should just digress, I am loss in
Imagery and words that I try to address,

with out knowing of the greats I will never
be able to put into words what I really want
to express.

To my poet friends, your words have unlocked
love and also the hidden hell.

Poetry is like insanity.     



— Eduardo Cruz, Nov 17, 2008

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Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

Reality and pleasure poem

E.C., This poem has much of my sentiment spelled out. I am compelled to write. I too write about how I have known love, and always failed miserably to make it last, except for my arts. Therefor my view of love has become 'beautiful sufferring'.....insanity for sure. And I tell you, I have loved some wonderful women, and lost them to be an artist until I die. Against the grain. Answering to the noises in my head, the need to express, and the ever harsher criticizm of my inability. wcw
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

W.C.

that is the answer, that we see what's in our mind and work to express the dreams and realities that we imagine. thanks for stopping by. E.C. is the name of my company. Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI MY DEAR POET FREN

WHAT a nice poem this is. so concise and straightforward. but, may i ask though, what do the word 'digress' mean? in line 1, 'most deepest', dont u thnk that the word most should be leave out? it shows redundant. this is suc a beautiful piece, Eddie. i hope that i can produce such a piece. ZARUL
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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI MY DEAR POET FREN

WHAT a nice poem this is. so concise and straightforward. but, may i ask though, what do the word 'digress' mean? in line 1, 'most deepest', dont u thnk that the word most should be leave out? it shows redundant. this is suc a beautiful piece, Eddie. i hope that i can produce such a piece. ZARUL
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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI MY DEAR POET FREN

WHAT a nice poem this is. so concise and straightforward. but, may i ask though, what do the word 'digress' mean? in line 1, 'most deepest', dont u thnk that the word most should be leave out? it shows redundant. this is suc a beautiful piece, Eddie. i hope that i can produce such a piece. ZARUL
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Zarul,

Digress means to move away from the central topic momentarily. "most deepest thoughts is talking about that which is in our subconscious, that's why there is a refrains to S. Freud. most deepest are the thoughts that are not in the fore front of our thoughts, but are the things of dreams that create poetry. Zarul I don't know if this will help. this poem is about how the mind works in relation to poetry. That was the beginning of Freud's work into the mind. "Poetry written in fiction that becomes truth for the poet." thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

thank u eddie

its a new word for me. u juz expand my vocab. i know at once that this poem is about relation of mind to poetry. thank u again. HUG ZARUL
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Wafi

17 years 6 months ago

Cruz Thanks

Cruz thanks for such a beautiful creation. You took me to so many different scenes in my mind. That is the bliss of sentiments that make one create such art. I can feel it many a times in my life. remembered a quote "A poet is a liar who always tell the truth" Wafi
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Wafi,

first of all you can call me Eddie, I never heard that quote before, a little strong for me. that was what I wanted, to take the poet through a tour of their own workings. thanks for your comment, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Good Poetry of poets

The secret world of poets that most never understand unless they too be a poet understanding the image of the minds eye. Fiction become reality to the poet is the part that caught my attention the most because half of what I start writing is truth and filled in with fiction. Some total fiction i have also. One word I like to being to your attention is *sore* did you mean soar here. Enjoy reading Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Barbara,

you are correct the word should be soar, thank you my dear friend. when I let my family read my poetry, they look at me with a dumbfounded look, so I stop reading to them. It's not easy! thank you so much for your sight as a poet! Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

Such is the life of a poet. We see, hurt, feel deeper than most and tend to put it all on paper and/or the computer screen. I also noticed you have the same problem family-wise as me. You start to read it and they sit there like "who cares about that junk". *LOL* That is also the life of a poet. No one but another poet fully understands and sometimes I am not sure we even do. Good write sir. Respectfully, Rett: "Did you ever notice that the politicians who want to ban gun ownership are the very ones that should be shot anyway?" Rett: 2008
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Rett,

it's a problem we all have, people out side my family do see it. Freud saw the potential of the subconscious that he saw in the poet, he made a career out of it. Can you imagine the insight of a poet lead to he being called the father of psychoanalysis. amazing!! thanks for your comments Sir, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Same here Eddie and Rett

I learn the hard way not to read my poetry to my family. Crazy, physco etc. are words I hear after the dumb-founded and who cares look. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Barb,

what they say does affect me, so I continue to read to them, I know for a fact that everyone has a trigger word that leads them down the path you need them to go the trick is finding that specific ward. Don't give up keep trying. I love it that they think I'm psycho, because they leave me alone when I write. thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

It is hard not to read it to them sometimes so I still do read it to them just not as often because sometimes I want to know what they think. You are right they do leave me alone when I am writing. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Janice,

expressing ourselves through poetry is what gets rid of all the madness in our head that the words create. Never quit writing because like the poets that were our beauty lies. thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

I almost missed this one still catching up. I do not read my poetry to my family. Neo is my poet family..... good write Stardust Eddie, I am tossing you some stardust... so sprinkle it on and fly into the sea, and may yours seas be clear and warm...... Patty
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Patty,

You are family too, it's nice having someone like you here with your positive attitude. It a wonderful thing. thanks for the stardust Tinkerbell. Eddie