Rabia's Will;

This is the most powerful poem I have read in a long time.... Thank you... "I want to put out the fires of Hell, And put the Heaven on fire." Magic... Do you mind if i include those lines in the lyrics of a song.... Check out my myspace site when you get the chance http://www.myspace.com/anonymouspoetsofourtime

whoa, this is such an absurd work. adore it. HUG ZARUL

The line below reads awkwardly. I've taken the liberty of making a suggestion: And put the Heaven on fire. (And set Heaven on fire) Or love Him in heaven’s desire. --> Heaven's Let in his love every soul sleep, --> His I like the combination of simplicity and passion in this poem, which is just right for the topic. Enjoyed it.

The line below reads awkwardly. I've taken the liberty of making a suggestion: And put the Heaven on fire. (And set Heaven on fire) Or love Him in heaven’s desire. --> Heaven's Let in his love every soul sleep, --> His I like the combination of simplicity and passion in this poem, which is just right for the topic. Enjoyed it.

I think I could be really thrilled by this. Perhaps we should prize anything or anyone or any god that we love for their own sakes, without ulterior motives. That's an advantage about poetry - because no one usually loves it just to try to make money or for any other reason than for its own, fascinating nature. I agree with Arrow that we would not normally use 'the' in front of Heaven (second line, first stanza). Best Wishes, Robert.

this is really powerful. Am I correct in assuming this is about worshipping together instead of fighting other beliefs? My best wishes again, Ink

and as it should be. Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll

you said in two deceptively simple verses something I would take two dozen to say, and probably not get right even then. awesomely succinct 5 stars. Respectfully, Jim "An armed populace is the last defense against tyrannical government": Race

in their comments. However, I do not prescribe to any 'ism' that man has created, if that is what one needs then I respect that, for myself the eastern attitude to nature defines closest my religion. If there HAD to be a god I might say it was trees as when I have felt very low and sad, I have looked at a tree and felt that it is growing, then so can I. They seem to have a quiet majesty of their own, but then that is myself putting the feelings into the tree!!! My mother had several boyfriends who wished to marry her, lucky! She decided she liked this person for that, this person for that but my father for himself alone, and married him. I do like the way you have put this feeling over, we all want to join you Wafi. From Ann of Norway