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Change of heart

 

The morning sun, hurts my eyes

I squint and stretch, before I rise

With joints so stiff and muscles aching

I understand the chance I’m taking


 

Drink some coffee, have a wash

Slice of toast and orange squash

Pop my pill to dull the pain

Then here I am alive again


 

Don my leathers, go outside

Start the bike, and off I ride

Feel the wind blow in my face

Hit the street at rapid pace


 

Throttle open nice and wide

In and out the bends I glide

Hit the highway in top gear

One sixty five, feel no fear


 

Throttle back take it steady

Realise, I'm not yet ready

Felt the buzz out on this drive

Feels so good to be alive

— shazbat, Nov 16, 2008

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Change of heart

I liked this piece because of the "I'm not ready' that is what made me smile, nicely written~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you very much Janice,

Thank you very much Janice, glad you liked it, I'm not suicidal really but just get days when I say "what the Hell" and take a few chances, the Adrenalin rush can be awesome. John