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Nov 15, 2008
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" Born Again "
The final piece of the puzzle
one last button torn
unlocked adoption records seen
a new babe is born
Are you my real mother
have we always lived this close
did you ever try to find me
Look...
we've got the same nose.
Mom says " I did it all for you Lucky"
and I did the right thing indeed,
look at the un-needy woman you've become,
and oh my... what perfect teeth.
Why do you think I've come to find you
her mind screams in disbelief
I've been missing something my whole life
there is a hole inside of me
Are you really you
did you feel it too
have you always felt alone
Will anyone ever see
the missing part of me
what's my name mom
am I home.
one last button torn
unlocked adoption records seen
a new babe is born
Are you my real mother
have we always lived this close
did you ever try to find me
Look...
we've got the same nose.
Mom says " I did it all for you Lucky"
and I did the right thing indeed,
look at the un-needy woman you've become,
and oh my... what perfect teeth.
Why do you think I've come to find you
her mind screams in disbelief
I've been missing something my whole life
there is a hole inside of me
Are you really you
did you feel it too
have you always felt alone
Will anyone ever see
the missing part of me
what's my name mom
am I home.
— themoonman, Nov 15, 2008
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Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
A real Gripper here, Moonman!
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Lonnie...
orgami
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adoption
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Thank you O...
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Richard
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Richard