Janice Pearce

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Tango Sunset

This evening's sunset
casts shadows across my feet,
dancing the tango

— Janice Pearce, Nov 12, 2008

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Janice

Beautiful sunset doing the tango. I love the images i am getting. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Barbara, Thank you so much for your comment! I appreciate it~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Janice

Sunset doing the tango. I love the images i am seeing. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Linda Moses

17 years 6 months ago

Janice

Very imaginative. The tango and the sunset both in red

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Your thoughts always appreciated, Linda! Thanks~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

Lovely!

I've recently moved to a farm up the west coast of South Africa where the sunsets are just...different to the city - way more open & wild & colourful (my pic on my profile is the sunset from my back porch). I'm sitting at work in the city & your poem reminded me of that. Deep contented sigh! Jo

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Jo, Your picture is beaautiful, thank you so much for your thoughrs~ Sometimes just a sunset is an important part of our life~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

yip!

That's why we moved from suburbia to (almost) the middle of nowhere :)

prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Jan Wow

I love how you take your imagination, give human quality to something that could be and make it come true. Great write

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Orange Tango

Patty, I am pleased that this poem did that for you, what a compliment! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

lovely images...

the sun mingling with those dancing feet... a picture for me this afternoon... thanks! Richard

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Sunset Tango

Thank you Moon. You are Very welcome~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Janice

Ahh, you have me wishing for the sun here! Beautifully done, as always. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Jess, Thank you so very much. Winter is almost upon us, and I'm dreaming in Kenny Chesney's Songs. _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Southern Africa.. there’s

Southern Africa.. there's atory.. there..lovely haiku, Barbara. ~A

Wafi

17 years 6 months ago

The Magic Of Haiku

A big and beautiful picture in so little words.... The magic of Haiku is evident in your poem Janice!

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Wafi, Thank you so much for your thoughts, I appreciate them~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

orgami

17 years 6 months ago

Dance

yes the virile sun and the dancers strutting their feirce passion I can feel this poem awesome

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

~O, If you can fell this poem, I am happy. Thank you so very much~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

pinksheep

17 years 6 months ago

The

sun seems to shimmy in the sky , like a person said orange and tango go together, also an image of the shadows moving , like another said you have put so much in a few words , a mesmerising piece-

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

pinksheeep, You comment warms my heart pinksheep, Thanks so very much~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Placid Poet

17 years 6 months ago

An awesome Haiku

This sounds of the sunset reflecting it's rays off a body of water while you watch them glisten across your feet. A lovely image.

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Placid Poet, So glad that you for enjoyed the images. I appreciate your comment~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

janice

Nice Haiku The title is what attracted me Chrys

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Chrys, Thank you for your praise on the title. Always nice hearing from you~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

zarul

17 years 6 months ago

JANICE

short yet beautiful ZARUL

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Tango Sunset

Yes, Hauku are short. Glad that you found it beautiful~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

barbsdad2003

17 years 5 months ago

Suggestion ...

An evening sunset casts shadows across my feet, dancing the tango becomes more immediate, more now, I think, if altered to This evening's sunset casts shadows across my feet, dancing the tango For your consideration. And thanx, Chuck

Janice Pearce

17 years 5 months ago

Hello Chuck

Another great suggestion from you, What would I do without your insight? Thanks Chuck! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________