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Feels Like a Haikuesque Day ~ 12 Ways to Feel Today
1.
I uncover my heart
let loose your arrow
find its mark
2.
I love you
three words
that last a lifetime
from birth to birth
3.
Sahasrara
the light
in the attic
where did
the room go?
4.
swan wings
glide through
love's quiver
snowy egrets
silently guard
the feathered pond,
snowflakes dance
5.
We are
so close
there is
no room.
6.
they say
the windows to the soul
are in eyes that are
so beautiful
one is captured
for all time,
now a tear
falling,
now an ocean.
7.
it was a rainbow serpent's sunrise
when the amber mist rose
with the morning dew
we
sail on the horizon,
braided clouds
soaked
with passion.
8.
Aspen leaves
golden tears
a Buddha passes
9.
in the pine grove
sacred circle
a moonflower grows
10,
seas of rainbows
a Buddha smiles
calming waters
11.
Aspen leaves to rust
turn, lake freezes over
Buddha's smile cracking ice
12.
we were light-forming roots,
the Aspen grand
and the lotus deep
Critiques
Jo Latimer
17 years 7 months ago
Loved the Pirsig quote!
Rob Graber
17 years 7 months ago
Most enjoyable!The