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Your Words

Part I

Your words
flog me
my skin weeps
with blood
layer by layer
i peel off
parts of myself
no longer useful
not to be denied,
i have gone now
and all you have left
is your solipsistic mind,
twisted
like mangrove roots
in wastefields
littered with angel ashes,
there are chasms
between us now
you have raped my
soul for the last time,
Beloved enemy mine
you have forgotten
what love feels like
but i promise you this,
once you have tasted
my blood
you'll never be able
to let me go,

your flesh will crawl
back to me.

Part 2

In India the cobra
stands king,
tall as any man
but ask the
charmer
about the rope trick
and how often
he has mistaken
the stick

there are no serpents
in Ireland
St. Patrick came
home one day
now all their
skins are shed
and only
fields of shamrocks
grow
greener than the green
in jealous eyes,
greener than the green
in a verdant heart

there are more deadly
serpents in Australia
than anywhere on earth
and this is where
the dreamers live.

3.

some day when snow-capped
mountains have melted
to form a pearl
and every sea and ocean
returns
to flare in the oblong sun
when the lotus
path of fragrant memory
leaves a scent
of who we were
we'll love again
as if there were no end,
no beginning to steal away
our hungry heart
with this pound of flesh.






— Kailashana, Nov 10, 2008

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yenti

yenti

17 years 7 months ago

More Words

It is a lovely piece of feelings, and well written,I am afraid that the cure for the one left thrashed by the selfish one, is to send that one loads of love till the memory fades away to others feelings, Yours Ian.T
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

I forgot to add part 2.

I forgot to add part 2. Weird morning... yesterday i wrote haiku-type poems all day... and today with tears-in-my-heart i have a thirst for blood. it's a good thing i'm not crazy. much. lol And thank you Ian that is the most beautiful way of putting exactly what needs to be done. Your gentle heart shines. ~A
yenti

yenti

17 years 7 months ago

to love again

A beautiful write :- There you are sorting it out, and that you cannot let go just means that closure has not happened, but what an energy to waste on a bad memory LOL Walk with all the beautiful things you have held so far and write of the Angels voices as it were, Yours, Ian
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

A powerful evocation of love and hate Anna

I am not at all suprised the poem would not let you go, there is considerable emotion focussed within its well chosen words. I particularly loved: when the lotus path of fragrant memory leaves a scent of who we were we’ll love again Keith
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Keith, glad you read the

Hi Keith, glad you read the poem, have added some more but won't append it; at least not for now. Yes. Love does seem to go on...and all the those who seem hell-bent in destroying it... I don't know.. it all passes away too swiftly...,so i tend to live in the moment. This is where life and love happens. ~A
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 7 months ago

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enjoyed all three parts of this.