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Apathy

APATHY

Through the darkened streets I walk
Where the homeless people stalk
At endless alleyways I balk
hearing unkempt people talk
through foggy clouds of emptiness
and shadow lands of loneliness.

(Society gone amiss!)

The hazy pools of streetlamp light
The emptiness of city night
The murky depths of hopeless flight
oozing blood to blind your sight
as neon rainbows glare at you
with empty words that read so true.

(Understood by just a few.)

Bright and gay the hanging sign
attracting you with its design.
Catchy phrases that sound benign
Hiding there so you won't find
the empty promises it's lobbed
from behind the bright facade.

(Oh God, they've been robbed!)

The hopeless and muddy plight
of staring eyes without sight.
Like a putrid creeping blight
on the never ending fight
of screaming at the neon sky
and wondering why you even try!

(Can't you hear them Cry?)

The ever present monotony
of sin and mediocrity
that everyone's too blind to see.
Wallowing in the misery
I stumble on impatiently
afraid I'll wander helplessly
with car lights shining blindingly
upon the shattered hopes of me.

(Can no one hear my plea?)

They turn their heads unconsciously
bragging of their honesty
as lies are flowing liquidly.
They walk on by hastily
to their home and family
living life so emptily
within this town of apathy...

(Apathy echoes soundlessly.)

— Rett, Nov 09, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Barbara

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
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Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

No apathy in your poetry, Rett!

A very forceful and revalent piece, my friend! Sings to me of a time when I too, was homeless and vulnerable! Beautifully written!
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

I've been there Lonnie

On my own from 13 till app. 20 and my first marriage. Never knew more than a month or so where I would sleep next. Field, bridge, alleyway, someone's house etc.. This was originally written in 72 and then re-written in 97, again in 2005 and again 2008 and the final version, I think, is this. Glad you understood it. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Apathy

Another great write here Rett Emotional Emptiness in it's purest form~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Janice

I am glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Mad as a hatter and full of chatter

Thanks kiala, I appreciate the encouragement always. I hear ya! Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
LD

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Human angst and its various expressions

Rett, The beauty and images of a piece like this is its wide human appeal. If there is a feeling of loneliness, a void, deceit, emptiness or any form of escapism that a human being may seek out to obliterate his own sense of inadequacy, these words will seek him out. To me, it is not just about a town or a place - it is about human condition in general. The thing is - we all bleed; we suffer illnesses both mental and physical; we are all vulnerable and the fact of being human with all its weaknesses, pretentiousness and facades is what binds us together. I really enjoyed this piece. Take care ... Leonard
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you very much Leonard

Yes, it is exactly that and what still amazes me is this write in the, hopefully, final form is still as valid today as the original I wrote. Maybe even more so. Each of us, in some form or another have suffered a bit of this to varying degrees. The dimly lit corner in your neighborhood. The impersonal way we are treated in stores or on sidewalks. The fearful looks if we dress differently etc... I appreciate you insight sir. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Was thinking the same thing....

You put this to any year... 1984, 1929, 2008, whenever - and it's always true. I guess it's easier just to turn the other way - a sort of "if I don't see it, it doesn't exist." type thing than it is to actually do something about it. I'm sorry you ever had to be a part of something like that.... You and Lon both.... ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"When I was strong, strong in the sound thought I'd see when day was done. Now I'm weaker than the palest blue Oh so weak in this need for you" - Nick Drake
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Jess, I appreciate it

Yep, it applies to whenever and wherever I think. As for what I went through, I don't know how Lonnie feels about it, but life isn't fair. It doesn't care how you feel or where you were born. The cards are dealt out and it is up to you to make the best hand out of it you can. I do not have many regrets other than a lack of education that is beyond price and most do not realize it. Without the life I had, I would not be me and I have been happy to be me for a long time now. You are sweet though Jess. Never get cynical about life and people. It just upsets your stomach and puts a sour look on your face. *S* Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008