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Nov 09, 2008
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Good Boy too
He’s not really naughty,Just misunderstoodSlightly disturbedWith potential for good His intelligence isSurely withoutAny uncertaintyQuestion or doubt Higher than many,But let me stateHe doesn’t possessAny malice or hate He just doesn’t knowThat he’s done badDon’t know he killedHis Mom and his Dad We’ll lock him awayFor the rest of his lifeHe’ll never have familyKids or a wife He’ll stay locked awayInstitutionalisedHe’ll stay locked awayTill the day that he dies
— shazbat, Nov 09, 2008
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Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Gritty and Hard! I Love it!
shazbat
17 years 7 months ago
Wow ! a compliment indeed.