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Nov 12, 2008
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Part 5: A Damaged Brain Exposed
Part 5: A Damaged Brain Exposed
Don't get me thong, wrough.
The small amount I do
understand (or think I do)---
what I do pick up
for mindful inspection---
is quite wonderful and inspires
dithyrambic awe.
Ein Wunderschoner Anblick
bietet sich dem Augen.
I erceive, phowever, sobered
by the knowledge that it's just---
to borrow, and with impudence
attach, an adjective or adverb
or two to a massic cletaphor---
a minute piece (that I see)
of the patiently docile elephant
that overreaching blind
and presuming people like me
foolishly try to depict through
the use of symbols.
By words, I mean.
---------
Sometime we see a cloud that's
dragonish,
A vapor sometime like a bear
or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain or blue
promontory
With trees upon't that nod
unto the world
And mock our eyes with air ...
---Shakespeare
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Perhaps I am bewildered
at least to some degree.
This from someone
who thinks a doily
makes a great handerchief.
Potential's better than none.
I gladly accept---
though with two fingers
firmly crossed---
a reality
(that is, that I might
be educable)
that may be at base but my brain's
way of backwards falling into
a goosedown's measure of comfort!
Mental der kunstgriff, I could
term it, but terhaps poo
optimistically.
But that's OK: I'll use it as
pillowy stepping-stone
(amidst rock-strewn wet stream)
to delusional peace of mind.
At least till
I find
something
better.
* * *
Night, Barb.
Sweet dreams.
Miss you.
DOD [dear old dad)
* * *
(end)
Comments
themoonman
17 years 5 months ago
Damaged...
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Again