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Nov 07, 2008
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Gilded Cliffs of Sanctuary
The sun gilded cliffs
a land mile beyond shore
are a sanctuary beckoning
for one ragged and worn
my boat was seaworthy
when I launched her this morning
the clouds darkened and the wind
freshened to a gale without warning
a long day tacking close hauled
into hard choppy seas
water coming aboard
with the spray and thru seams
hours spent endlessly bailing
the anchor never would hold
to make way back to harbour
far more reckless than bold
the sun is close now to setting
shining under the clouds
but the wind will not lessen
the waves heavy and loud
night is bringing her blackest
with an incoming tide
and the rocky shore leeward
offers nowhere to hide
better sailors I've known
who've weathered worse storms
that's the one hope that's offered
to give strength till the morn
a land mile beyond shore
are a sanctuary beckoning
for one ragged and worn
my boat was seaworthy
when I launched her this morning
the clouds darkened and the wind
freshened to a gale without warning
a long day tacking close hauled
into hard choppy seas
water coming aboard
with the spray and thru seams
hours spent endlessly bailing
the anchor never would hold
to make way back to harbour
far more reckless than bold
the sun is close now to setting
shining under the clouds
but the wind will not lessen
the waves heavy and loud
night is bringing her blackest
with an incoming tide
and the rocky shore leeward
offers nowhere to hide
better sailors I've known
who've weathered worse storms
that's the one hope that's offered
to give strength till the morn
— Edevold, Nov 07, 2008
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Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Gilded Cliffs of Sanctuary
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Gilded Cliffs of Sanctuary
Edevold
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks for the comments
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Edevold