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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Nov 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Teenage Dreams

Teenage Dreams

I live my life chasing dreams
Scurrying above the clouds
Run a mile in the open plains
Searching for that which brings me joy
Then eye of darkness seeks my soul

In a pant of breathe, I fly like an eagle
Into the setting of the sun


— Barbara Writes, Nov 07, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

You leave me breathless

this is sheer beauty and grand poetry, just just one letter in one line Then eyes of darkness seeks my soul Then eyes of darkness seek my soul cheers, Jess
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

thanks for the delightful comment, and the suggestion. always appreciated. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 7 months ago

Barbara

Very nice, I enjoyed reading. I think sometimes the short poems are the best and say the most
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Linda

Thanks for all your comments. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
LD

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Barbara - What's going on

Then eyes of darkness seek my soul - These lines spring from the fiery depths of inspiration. Very moving piece which - I can honestly say - I relate to. The eyes of darkness forever seek my soul compelling me to fan the dying embers of my life force into a torch of sublime brightness which led me to write in my diary one fateful day Whispering zephyrs bring back to life Dying embers of ambition Thanks for leading me into the depths of your soul. Leonard
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Wow

Thanks for sharing your soul. I have been having dreams about the eyes of darkness all my life. This is the first time i have been able to put just a small piece to poetry. Glad it came of well. Thanks for reading and commenting. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Barbara

A beautiful piece here, you surely brought me there. Nicely done~