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Nov 06, 2008
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FOOTPRINTS
I searched the world over
I traveled far and wide
To see if I had been
I walked the sandy beaches
And found I left no footprint
Climbed the highest mountain
To see if the wind would call my name
Walked through many cities and saw
No recognition from any passerby
Where had I been all my life
What had I done with my time
I tried to speak but had no voice
As I had seldom spoken out
Had eyes, but did not see
I was always so preoccupied
Then I realized where I had been
I was a quiet soul
And had always lived inside my mind
Did I leave any of me along the way
Somewhere there is a book
With many names inscribed
I know that I am there
To show that I have been
And there will be my footprints
For my Lord to see
And he will call my name
And will acknowledge me
— Linda Moses, Nov 06, 2008
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Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
FOOTPRINTS
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Apart from the last 3 lines I adored this
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
LOL
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Chrys
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Linda...
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Richard
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Footprints
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Janice
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Linda - I love the metaphor
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Leonard
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Patty