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Janice Pearce

Nov 06, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fall Etchings

~~~~~~Written in collaboration with Leonard Daranjo~~~~~~

I

Parachuting leaves
tracing the winds contours
alight gracefully

II

Sun's golden shavings
filtered through layers of mist
tier the horizon

III

Forest openings
splattered by golden honey,
autumn's overlay

— Janice Pearce, Nov 06, 2008

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17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings

nicely done Respectfully Yours, Barbara

17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings

Thank you for taking the time to read this, and comment Barbara!

L

17 years 7 months ago

Very well-written!

Reminds me somewhat of a piece I did called, "Learning"! Really enjoyed, thanks!

17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings

Thanks so much Lonnie, we appreciate your fedback~

17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings...

the title baited me in for the read... you two really are very good together or alone... glad to be here at this time so I can be a part of it... excellent haiku my friends.... looking forward to your next collaboration... Richard

17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings

Richard, Thank you so much for the compliment~We truly appreciate it!

P

prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Janice

Very well thought out I enjoyed it

17 years 7 months ago

Fall Etchings

Hey Patty, Thank you for commenting, always appreciate you stoping by~ ____________________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. Janice Pearce