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Nov 05, 2008
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Shattered Crystal 4-The Golden Orb
Shattered Crystal 4
The Golden Orb
A fiery lass, sometimes crass
Stalked from the tavern door
Down muddy road, again she strode
To home her anger bore
Those filthy hands from drinking man
While others laughed and cheered
Her anger deep she fell asleep
Though sleep was what she feared
Each night the same her anger came
Though she willed it not
Each morning fresh she did confess
And hated what life begot
On way to town, rain came down
Soaking her to the skin
Shelter found, she looked around
As something stirred within
Flicker of light gave startled sight
Beneath a broken board
A crystal globe she did behold
Beneath the plank was stored
The morning came, also a change
A lady there of means
No tavern wench to serve them drink
Passing strange it seems
A man to serve ale with verve
Dressed fine as can be
Tavern owned, each lowly stone
By one of class you see
Upon her breast at her behest
A pendant with a stone
An orb aglow hung just so
And it was not alone
Below the orb a crystal shard
Not meant for our kind
Though many stared, no man dared
To touch her crystalline find
For many a year with nary a fear
She wore the crystal shard
Till one day she went away
From the tavern courtyard
A bargain it’s said with those long dead
She honored in the end
A pile of stone, she stood alone
Then faded in the wind
Let all beware those who dare
The crystals siren call
A price you’ll pay for they will slay
Our kind will ever fall
The Golden Orb
A fiery lass, sometimes crass
Stalked from the tavern door
Down muddy road, again she strode
To home her anger bore
Those filthy hands from drinking man
While others laughed and cheered
Her anger deep she fell asleep
Though sleep was what she feared
Each night the same her anger came
Though she willed it not
Each morning fresh she did confess
And hated what life begot
On way to town, rain came down
Soaking her to the skin
Shelter found, she looked around
As something stirred within
Flicker of light gave startled sight
Beneath a broken board
A crystal globe she did behold
Beneath the plank was stored
The morning came, also a change
A lady there of means
No tavern wench to serve them drink
Passing strange it seems
A man to serve ale with verve
Dressed fine as can be
Tavern owned, each lowly stone
By one of class you see
Upon her breast at her behest
A pendant with a stone
An orb aglow hung just so
And it was not alone
Below the orb a crystal shard
Not meant for our kind
Though many stared, no man dared
To touch her crystalline find
For many a year with nary a fear
She wore the crystal shard
Till one day she went away
From the tavern courtyard
A bargain it’s said with those long dead
She honored in the end
A pile of stone, she stood alone
Then faded in the wind
Let all beware those who dare
The crystals siren call
A price you’ll pay for they will slay
Our kind will ever fall
— Rett, Nov 05, 2008
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Critiques
Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Great Fantasy Poem!
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you Lonnie
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Barbara
andyk
17 years 7 months ago
you wee tinker, binder of spells
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you you wee little snip
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
and the saga continues