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Shattered Crystal 4-The Golden Orb

Shattered Crystal 4
The Golden Orb

A fiery lass, sometimes crass
Stalked from the tavern door
Down muddy road, again she strode
To home her anger bore

Those filthy hands from drinking man
While others laughed and cheered
Her anger deep she fell asleep
Though sleep was what she feared

Each night the same her anger came
Though she willed it not
Each morning fresh she did confess
And hated what life begot

On way to town, rain came down
Soaking her to the skin
Shelter found, she looked around
As something stirred within

Flicker of light gave startled sight
Beneath a broken board
A crystal globe she did behold
Beneath the plank was stored

The morning came, also a change
A lady there of means
No tavern wench to serve them drink
Passing strange it seems

A man to serve ale with verve
Dressed fine as can be
Tavern owned, each lowly stone
By one of class you see

Upon her breast at her behest
A pendant with a stone
An orb aglow hung just so
And it was not alone

Below the orb a crystal shard
Not meant for our kind
Though many stared, no man dared
To touch her crystalline find

For many a year with nary a fear
She wore the crystal shard
Till one day she went away
From the tavern courtyard

A bargain it’s said with those long dead
She honored in the end
A pile of stone, she stood alone
Then faded in the wind

Let all beware those who dare
The crystals siren call
A price you’ll pay for they will slay
Our kind will ever fall

— Rett, Nov 05, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

Great Fantasy Poem!

Very Cool, Rett! Grabbed me with the first few lines and held me spellbound until the final words! Great work!
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Lonnie

It is the fourth one I have done so far. I don't know if I'll ever get it done, but I am trying to make a story out of it. A short story probably. It was just an idea that grabbed me a while back. Glad you enjoyed it. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Rett

Another good one for your short story Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Barbara

Maybe I'll have a whole book of short stories on this theme. *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
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andyk

17 years 7 months ago

you wee tinker, binder of spells

Very good dear fellow. Splendid. Capital old sport. I don`t know about short story, long story is my guess.
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you you wee little snip

From your words I sometimes expect the consumate brit butler and at others the long haired thug(of which I used to be) *LOL* Your comments are all interesting and I enjoy them a lot. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

and the saga continues

shoot, skip the short story and just make a fiction book! You could be the next big thing! I so love the Ray Bradbury undertones of these Orb writes. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."