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Eclectic Bag of Beliefs (Sonnet)

 

Into my eclectic bag of beliefs   

I stuff multitudinous tapestries,      

Woven from joy’s precious days and grief’s

Cheerless realities.  Pictures that tease

The senses and party on past regrets

Fill up the fast diminishing spaces;                  

Tied up in granny knots, causing upsets

If undone.  Unrecognizable faces,

Inexpressible places jam the landscape

Of memories past, recall people past.    

From the fabric of time there’s no escape

It’s the way life is done.  The die is cast;

I will arrive at home on death’s doorstep

With excess baggage, craving still more depth.


— deelilah, Nov 04, 2008

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Jacob

17 years 7 months ago

I really liked this poem. I

I really liked this poem. I love the way it captures the scattered way we develop and accumulate memories that make up our beliefs. I loved the line 'party on past regrets'
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Jacob

Thank you for this high praise. Because you liked a sonnet, I shall put you on my friends list, if that is alright. I checked out your profile and see that you haven't been here since June. Welcome back. I just found this site a few weeks ago. I think your "Sonnet to the Birth of Ideas had much potential. I personally like the form because it helps me move along the storyline without rambling on. I count the beats in my sleep--or to go to sleep. Yours, deelilah
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Donna...

we all arrive unready for departure... an inspiring poem you've written here... a bag of party favored ideals and past memories... great poem! multitudinous... this word sort of tripped my unable to wrap around it tongue... and that may be all it is... country boy ya know! might just be personal preference too... but let me say again... great poem... the title drew me to it... Richard
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 7 months ago

multitudinous thanks

I'm really glad you liked this Richard. I'll have to ponder that big word a little--it did take care of 5 whole syllables. D.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Donna...

I knew I was stepping on your "feet" of your sonnet with that observation of mine...lol... did you like my pun? and after reading it over again... and saying the word again and again... my old mouth can finally wrap around it... I would have used something else... but that is for sure personal preference... do keep your big word my poet friend... Richard
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 7 months ago

Don't give it a thought.

I certainly didn't feel you stepped on any feet (ha ha). My husband does the pun thing all day long,and I, of course am a captive audience. He would have got that faster than me, then maybe not--he works hard at not understanding poetry. D.
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Deelilah

A long lost poem updated ... I love these ones unearthed gems from another age lol .. everythings well and truely been dealt with before i got here so I will just say ... I loved this one :) awesome sonnet I still have yet to tackle one maybe one day when things are calmer lol .... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x