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Nov 04, 2008
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Good Boy !
I’ve been a real good boy mom
I’ve tidied up the yard
I’ve cut the lawn and weeded
I’ve been working awful hard
I’ve done my chores, and then some
I’ve done my homework too
I’ve polished all the floors
What more d' I have to do
I know that I’ve been naughty
I know that I’ve been bad
I didn’t mean to shoot him
Didn't mean to kill my Dad
Are ya gonna call the cops Mom
Are ya gonna call the law
Let me tell ya momma
y'aint walkin' out that door
I've been a real good boy Mom
I've finished every chore
Get up momma please
Stop bleedin' on the floor
— shazbat, Nov 04, 2008
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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 7 months ago
Good Boy
Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Hit me like a two-by-four!
Jasmine
17 years 7 months ago
Way dark poem...
shazbat
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks you guys for your
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Good Boy !
shazbat
17 years 7 months ago
Well Barbara, you are too
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
John...
shazbat
17 years 7 months ago
Richard, I’ll certainly