Sapphire Crescendo

Play
For me
That sound
I intensely crave
That sway in true blue
That undeniable precision
Those notes of passion shown
That rhythm takes over my body now
My soul singing in melodic time, quietly
The whine hits me with staggering energy
Ecstasy in string, dominance found in striking
Take me as your blushing bride with in that sound
Play for me music man, play me that dream I now feel

— theladyblue, Nov 01, 2008

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Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Ladyblue,

I can hear the music in this write. I love what you did with the construction of the words. I always forget what that style of writing is called. great write! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Diego

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

thanks so much!

this is actually a piece from a few years back but I came across it and thought why not lol i don't recall the style either or that I wanted to do anything more but have the piece build into a would be crescendo lol the inspiration comes from my crazy hot love affair with blues music...read 'Indigo Obsession' for more of the same lol thanks so much for the comment! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Emarie

if your talking delta blues I'm in. I love the old 1930's and 40's blues nothing but love, whiskey, and poverty. some really great songs!! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Deigo

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

honey...

I am the Delta Blues lol and yes it does sound like my life...nothing but love, whiskey and poverty lol but really it is any form of blues/jazz...somethin' bout that guitar's whine that speaks straight to my soul...can't fully explain it but I wouldn't have it any other way! thanks bunches again! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

it’s called concrete

it's called concrete poetry. And it's a step above ;--) ~A

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Saphire Crescendo

Amazing my friend. these words do build into the crescendo of love. I hope i will find these notes and someone to play them for me.