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FRIENDSHIP

"Everthing which begins in life has an end.
Life begins; life ends,
Day begins; day ends,
Week begins; week ends,
Month begins; month ends,
Year begins; year ends,
So to our FRIENDSHIP begins hpoe never ends." 
— Poem, Oct 30, 2008

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Region, Country: Karnataka, IND

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17 years 6 months ago

I find this lacking in emotion.

Maybe you could write more about how it feels to start something that you know will end yet hope won't. I once read a quote to the effect that love is always a tragedy in that either the lover dies or the love does. It's a theme worth exploring.