Caustic Heart

Bitter dreams lay flat the moons of my day
Questioned answers given of truths tart lips
Unsure of the day, the galaxies fade softly
Wishes lost in penniless wells, crumble
Souls resting on holy saints prayers, fall
Yet hearts of a caustic design, beat in time

— theladyblue, Oct 30, 2008

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Critiques

poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Emarie

Thought provoking writing. question lost on or in penniless wells very nice wording Chrys

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

It was 'in' dear

and thank you!! Corrected now! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Emarie

Caustic hearts... they do indeed keep up to times beat... enjoyed the read Ladyblue... layered with meanings... Richard

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

Richard

thanks so much for the read!!! I can always count on you to read between lines! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Emarie,

I read your poems and it's like a gentle breeze blowing over me, bring imagery to me. I know you think my comments are to much, but I only convey what the poem conveys to me. you really are a wonderful writer! thanks, Eddie "I love animals, their just like meat"

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

you do manage to foil my attempts at a humble nature but i suppose ill live lol to know that i reach you in such away is an incredible compliment to my soul...thank you so very much! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'