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Night Games **

** Disclaimer:  I suppose I can't limit the ages that view this, but I do feel compelled to mention that this is material appropriate for adults.  Should you be offended by such material, or otherwise unable to view such material due to state law, parental rules, filters, etc.. then I ask you continue no further.  Many thanks **


Your stare
Ice blue eyes bore into mine.
A feeling of helplessness
and awe
a wry grin
And I'm wonderin' what you're up to.

"Lay back"
You command
"I want to view you
take in your form
admire my princess as she lays there
visually drink you in.... Do it now."

"Aye, my love."
As I quickly obey
Twitching
tingling
as you continue to stare

A smile
and you approach
and indulge me with light, feathery touches.
I reach for you
But you pin my hands back.
"Uh uh uh..."  you admonish as you shake your head.

I pout, but keep my hands over my head
as instructed.
Soft little purrs emanate
from your explicit attentions
masterfully creating magic
as you've done so many times before.

I am at your command, my love.
We both know what will happen next.
The question is how long can you keep
your princess on edge?
Anticipation......





— infinite_dwarf, Oct 29, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Critiques

Mark

Mark

17 years 7 months ago

hmm

::twinge:: Man feels this.
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

I can't watch this

*walks off with a limp* while looking over shoulder. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

I am not meaning to judge here, but this guy is a control freak. Do not let anyone take control of you this way. Put the cuffs on him. Sweet torture belongs to women. Now lets no have a battle of the sexes, I am war weary. Patty
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

LOL!!!!

That "guy" was Jonathan. Control freak... far from it my dear. All is fair in "night games" I'm trying to find the correct words so as not to sound too crude or give away too much info, but we play fair. It's called a switch, and we alternate. thanks for the protectiveness, though. :~) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"The fortunes of fables are able To see the dawn Now witness the quickness with which We get along To sing the blues you've got to live the dues and Carry on." - CSN&Y
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

Sorry, glad you switch.... maybe I should stay out of adult subjects. Glad you understand my protectiveness. Patty walks away hanging head.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

You guys are all

You guys are all tooooooooooooooooo much and I love ya for it (did i say that out loud?) Anywho.... Jess... Next time be more specific... ANNA DO NOT READ THIS, after all I live all alone.. and I have no one I want near me....damn it anyway! May you and Jon have endless years of trying all types of .... er.....ummm...positionings? Hugs. ~A
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Gee, now I feel bad....

People twitching, limping off (quit peekin', Rett..) hangin' their heads... It honestly was not my intention. In all honesty, I was planning on writing something much more risque (did I spell that right?) but felt that it would be somewhat inappropriate, so I instead penned a memory, and left it open to interpretation - mainly so that if a minor were to not heed my warnings, they wouldn't be permanently scarred for life! Anna, girl, we love you too. (at least I do) Thank you for the well wishes, we're at 7 years together come February. I hope for plenty more! hugs all around! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"The fortunes of fables are able To see the dawn Now witness the quickness with which We get along To sing the blues you've got to live the dues and Carry on." - CSN&Y
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

*LOL* I liked it Jess

I was just using a little tongue in cheek...errr... make that facetious humor. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008
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vonnegutfan

17 years 7 months ago

It’s perfect! I am going

It's perfect! I am going to take a very very cold shower now. Great read.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Dave

LOL! I've heard that doesn't help, but what do I know? Thanks for the visit. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

Oh me Oh my...

First off just so everyone knows...I had nothing to do with the corruption of this poor young girl...hehehehehehe Lurve it, Lurve it, Lurve it! but I do agree with Patty...put the cuffs on him chica...take whats yours! hehehehehehehe <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Sureeeeee.... :~P

Maybe not directly, but you were an inspiration... LOL! Love your tagline. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
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colin mitchell…

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Jess… a Nick Drake

Hi Jess... a Nick Drake fan... me to... have all his albums, "way too blue" is my favorite... "Night Games" do I detect a smattering of D/s here ? A beautifully sensual write Jess what more can I say ?
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Colin

We're not true D/S, but sometimes it's all in good fun. Nick Drake - yes. Trying to get all his albums, I have Bryter Later and Pink Moon. I can't pick a fav song, but "Fly", "Northern Sky", "Hanging On A Star", and "From The Morning" get put on repeat a lot! Thanks for the visit and the comments! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks, Janice

Hope you're doing better now. Jai is a Siberian, same general family as the maine coone, Norwegian Forest, etc. Move went smooth, we're just trying to unpack and get organized now. :~) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
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orgami

17 years 6 months ago

good imagery

of course I have a very vivid imagination Good sexy poem!! Love your kitty kat we have this big ol orange cat hes just the suckiest cat going and purrs and kneads his big paws do people purr too when they get some good attention?
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Goodness...

I'm gonna tell your Momma... lol... thank you for the sights... vivid expressionism... Richard
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Jessica,

Well! Who has the control here, really? Nudge-nudge. Ah, a poem: I was sixteen Dad driving his Cutlass with the roaring V-eight along 401. And then that sound… “fuck” like now I was old enough to stop the coddling, old enough to deal with sharpness; to weigh honesty for integrity or hurt, or some homogenized mix of joy and grief. Almost, like… a real person. Brian