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Girl
If you listen to me, girl
My love will wrap around you
And warm you on all those cold, lonely nights
And bask you in sunlight
And take you on the world
If you are still inside my heart
You’re reading books of, lonely women
Who teach lessons of self-sacrifice
And how is the cold of the night?
And how is the air you breathe?
And how are the muscles of your heart, still holding you up?
Watch me as I try to fight for your love
And watch as I fall to my knees
You thought I would never last this long
As you look to the sky
You dreamed of someone else
And how is the time you spend alone?
And how is the dark you live in?
And how is the air you refuse to breathe, still keeping you alive?
And how is the water of the world?
And how is the breathe of god?
And how is the love from your lover, is he holding you up?
He is holding you in
He is holding you in
Critiques
zarul
17 years 7 months ago
HI
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 6 months ago
A well though out love poem