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Oct 29, 2008
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reverence in stalemate
I've been watching people
as their lives gyrate around
whatever axis available,
hamsters and wheels
Try catching someones eye
driving in the sameness of
afternoon traffic.
You will see where their routine
chose slowly how to break them
after enough years. Their faces will
present you lines and corners.
Traffic moves
the way misery would choose.
compulsive and bowing towards
a swallowing order
We spent our lives waiting in lines
that lead nowhere,
These creatures of action freeze their joints
and learn to stand crane legged,
if the other does not have to feel.
A sad beauty in what they are not dancing.
as their lives gyrate around
whatever axis available,
hamsters and wheels
Try catching someones eye
driving in the sameness of
afternoon traffic.
You will see where their routine
chose slowly how to break them
after enough years. Their faces will
present you lines and corners.
Traffic moves
the way misery would choose.
compulsive and bowing towards
a swallowing order
We spent our lives waiting in lines
that lead nowhere,
These creatures of action freeze their joints
and learn to stand crane legged,
if the other does not have to feel.
A sad beauty in what they are not dancing.
— whitetea, Oct 29, 2008
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Critiques
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
So true...
Blue_Halcyon
17 years 4 months ago
I like it