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Oct 28, 2008
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Well...
When I see
When I see you again
When I see, you again
What I said, was meaningless
What I meant, was… well everything
When I answered the door
I didn’t know, who would be there
When I looked into your eyes
I didn’t know, who would look back
What I did, was unforgivable
What I tried to do, was… well everything
Don’t look back now
Don’t look back now
It’s all a lie…
What I felt, was love
What I tried to give to you, was… well everything
Tell me I am someone
I just don’t know why
Tell me I am beautiful
I just don’t know how
What I said
What I tried to say to you
What I did
What I tried to do for you
What I failed at
…Everything…
Don’t take me back
Don’t take me back
I would just fail you again— washing tears, Oct 28, 2008
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Critiques
theladyblue
17 years 7 months ago
heartbreaking...
zarul
17 years 7 months ago
hi
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Truly wonderful poem.. the