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Oct 27, 2008
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Susie Q
Susie Q
knows what to do,
she's one very good friend,
fade away
earth and the day
she'd be there 'til the end.
Imagine that
with every cat
that's helped me through my strife,
don't ya know
which way to go
considering it's your life.
I called my girl
on the "tilta-whirl"
tried to help her eyes to see,
though all the while
I cherish her smile
her heart has been there for me.
So through the day
needless to say;
after all's been done and said;
one might weep
because two can't keep
a secret -'lest one of you are dead.
knows what to do,
she's one very good friend,
fade away
earth and the day
she'd be there 'til the end.
Imagine that
with every cat
that's helped me through my strife,
don't ya know
which way to go
considering it's your life.
I called my girl
on the "tilta-whirl"
tried to help her eyes to see,
though all the while
I cherish her smile
her heart has been there for me.
So through the day
needless to say;
after all's been done and said;
one might weep
because two can't keep
a secret -'lest one of you are dead.
— docmaverick, Oct 27, 2008
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