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shazbat
shazbat
Oct 27, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Big Guy

 He was a big sorta guy

Kinda narrow at the hips

With great broad shoulders

And a smile on his lips

Nobody messed

With this giant of a man

He’s as gay as you like

And Karate 5th Dan

— shazbat, Oct 27, 2008

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

shazbat

Perhaps it wasn't intended but there is a song with almost the same wording not enough here I suggest you extend it. Chrys
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 6 months ago

Chrys, I think the song you

Chrys, I think the song you refer to is "Big John" by Jimmy Dean. "Every morning at the mine you could see him arrive Stood six feet six and weighed 2-45 Kinda broad at the shoulder and narrow at the hip every body knew you didnt give no lip to big John" got to admit i pinched a little bit of this one, I wrote mine for a guy called Alan that works with my wife. He's 6'4" teaches martial arts in his spare time Oh! he's gay too. Thanks for reading. John
Mark

Mark

17 years 6 months ago

LOOL

::smiles:: ::laughter:: Man thinks this.