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Finally Up

There's nothing quite like
the first to come your way,
it's an increment of measure
be it work, or be it play;

more often than it's not
it's an enemy to the end,
but on occasion it can be
your very bestest friend.

I've even heard it said
that it can be on your side,
and if you're running from it
it's quite difficult to hide.

If you've partied for too long
you'll likely be "half-lit",
and if you break the law,
you'll end up doing "it".

When you can't return my call
then you haven't quite enough,
and when our roles spin around
it'll be your turn to be, "gruff".

You're working over it
if you're staying far too late,
but at a sporting event
that turns out to be great!

One graduates in stages
from the innocent and pure,
it also takes this element
for good wine to mature.

You might have just enough of it
to have a second cup,
but for me, I have to end this
for my time's finally up!
— docmaverick, Oct 25, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Doc,

Our whole life revolves on time, until it just stops. all of this is so true, I enjoyed. good write Doc! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Deigo
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 7 months ago

You're correct, Eddie.......

..."time" is so much more than merely an increment of measure. We all breathe so much life into it, that I felt it was "about time" someone called a "time out", and spoke about this "time bomb" for the first, and last "time". LOL! Thanx for not giving me a "hard time" over this "timely" piece. Thanks for your "timely remarks. You, my friend...are truly ahead of your "time". One more "time", I thank you. Best regards, 'till the next "time" we write. #{:>{) doc.