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Oct 24, 2008
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Be still my Beloved.....
Be still my beloved, your pain has been heard
Be brave oh suffering soul, your suffering has been seen
You have been so, so brave up till now
No matter how threatening was the breaking of the bough
No matter what the path ahead holds oh loved one
Know that you have always, always done what needed to be done
Have always, always said what needed to be said
You will be missed for all of eternity by all who know your name
Life without you will never, never be whole
Yet, as cruel as this world is and can be, life will move on
Though you will never be forgotten
Your legacy will love on in generations to come
Your gentle smile still lives on
Your gentle, loving gaze will still be felt
Your loving yet, strong guidance still experienced
Your legacy will live on for generations to come…………..
Be brave oh suffering soul, your suffering has been seen
You have been so, so brave up till now
No matter how threatening was the breaking of the bough
No matter what the path ahead holds oh loved one
Know that you have always, always done what needed to be done
Have always, always said what needed to be said
You will be missed for all of eternity by all who know your name
Life without you will never, never be whole
Yet, as cruel as this world is and can be, life will move on
Though you will never be forgotten
Your legacy will love on in generations to come
Your gentle smile still lives on
Your gentle, loving gaze will still be felt
Your loving yet, strong guidance still experienced
Your legacy will live on for generations to come…………..
— Feebie, Oct 24, 2008
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zarul
17 years 7 months ago
iN 2ND LINE, ‘you
Tink
16 years 5 months ago
feebie
Jillian Botha
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for those....