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LC
Lenny of Cohen
Oct 22, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I -Dent- Ity

created

before

the
first

from what
can never
be known

coming to us
from a place
we cannot see

infinity stretching
inside
of me
floating onwards
to the outside
of my new found identity

(C)2008 Lenny Gazbowski





— Lenny of Cohen, Oct 22, 2008

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Boyachilles

17 years 6 months ago

A Cauldron of Words

This poem, over the few times I have read it, has changed meaning for me. Everything from pregnancy to the very mark each human makes upon the earth, like a crater from rocks in the moon. It is this ever-possible of poetry which makes it such a gift of an artform, and you display it very well here. Thank you for your addition to the site!
LC

Lenny of Cohen

17 years 6 months ago

Appreciate

your comments! Thanks for taking the time to read and express your thoughts on my poem. Lenny be rebellious!