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A Little Kenyon

A Little Kenyon

Wrinkled skin,
Smooth as silk
Milk gums,
Hiccups,
Smelly poop
Bright eyed,
Angel smiles,
Sweet kisses
Gaa gaa, goo goo
Can’t get enough of
My little grand boo.
— Barbara Writes, Oct 22, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

LOL!

Ahhh, kids are great so long as they aren't mine. I think the in-laws are gonna have a problem with Lily and the cat. She can sit up on her own now, and when she sees the cat, she reaches out to him. She makes little grabby motions with her hands and goes "Ooo! Ooo!" Hope kitty cat can outrun her when she learns to crawl! Adorable write. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"So you stand on the corner in your new English clothes, and you look so polished from your hair down to your toes. Ah, but still your finger's gonna pick your nose after all." - Billy Joel
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Jess K

lol I'm wit ya on that, he is not mine. grands go home to mommy and daddy. thanks for reading and commenting Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Such a cute write Barbara

Kids are great until they hit two. It goes steadily downhill after that! Flush when they hit their teens, it'll save a lot of trouble. *LOL* I loved it Barbara. Respectfully, Rett: "Does this election remind you of The Emperors New Clothes? No one has the guts to tell him because..." Rett
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Rett

I love em at two, when they hit ten, its down hill for me at preteen, teens I am drowning in a sea of adolescence. LOL Thanks for commenting and reading. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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zarul

17 years 7 months ago

hye barbara

a little Kenyon. i love small kid. they are so adorable as long as they do not try to pamper themseles with my mum. since i was young, i am ery full of jealous and hatredness to see my mum papmpering other small kid. its like i ont like my mum loving other kids other than me. haha. till im now 16, the jealousy is getting worse, not better. mayb you may think that im such an immature teen, but i confess that i can change everything but not my jealousness. even with my bestfriends i am being jealous when others are trying to take his atentions away from me. its not wrong for you to say that im being too possessive, im now a teen and i can say that being a teenager is both fun and thrilling. but its not easy to pass the teen years without being oercome by peer pressures. only the strongest one can survive. let us pray that i would be among the strongest teenager. I am not agree with Rett for saying that parents will sae lots of trouble when their children reach teens. because based on my obeervations, parents complaint more when their children are at their teen years. they are facing a hard times in controlling their children from being into gang and other social problem. een my mum confront me saying that she is hauing hard times taking care of me, my needs, and my time management. she even asks me to choose motivational and inspirational books instead of storybooks. maybe this is one of her ways to let me be a better teen. i hope that i would see more of your great piece of writing. SMILE GREAT DAY SEND MY REGARD TO YOUR KIDS
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Parents

Thanks for commenting and reading. Being a teen you have no idea what it like to raise a teen you only know what it like to be a teen. I have four kids, 3 adults one your age. I will send them your regards. Respectfully Yours, Barbara