Acrostic Poem: The Painful Truth

Did it ever occur to you that, with

Every breath you take you are marching

Away from your beginnings

Towards an end that most people

Hate to acknowledge

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Tessadiana

17 years 6 months ago

wow

wow thats really pretty it makes me think..i really enjoyed how you continued a statment though all the letters Tessadiana<3 p.s. i beleive your brother is my religion teacher

poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

leonard

A traditional acrostic will use the title of the poem well done of the title were death Chrys

leonard daranjo

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks Chrys

For stopping by. I have given it a title just to be a little different. Leonard

leonard daranjo

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you Tessadiana and welcome to the site

Yes!!! My brother is indeed your Religion Teacher. I just checked it out with him. What a great way to get in touch. Thank you for your comment. Leonard

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

why yes it had occurred to me, a long time ago in fact... loved your truth poem.... traditional acrostic... maybe not... but your title adds flavor and meaning to your poem... I love the way you write... your friend Richard

leonard daranjo

17 years 6 months ago