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Oct 21, 2008
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That Sweet Sweet Smell
Welcome to your nightmare,
aren't you glad you're not alone.
There are many doors that lead you here,
but none will take you home.
I am the Spider waiting patiently,
the Stalker with some time...
I'll wait right here
until I smell your fear
and then you'll be all mine.
I am the Beast in your sweet fairy tales,
the dark cloud in your dreams,
I am the doctor eating patients here,
they come in but never leave.
Pleasures, Pains,
they are quite the same,
but of course, you won't know that...
but you'll observe and learn
and when it comes your turn
your cries won't be an act.
When your head gets cleared
from the pleasures here,
or... you are getting used to pain...
I'll just move you on to better things,
until I smell your fear again.
aren't you glad you're not alone.
There are many doors that lead you here,
but none will take you home.
I am the Spider waiting patiently,
the Stalker with some time...
I'll wait right here
until I smell your fear
and then you'll be all mine.
I am the Beast in your sweet fairy tales,
the dark cloud in your dreams,
I am the doctor eating patients here,
they come in but never leave.
Pleasures, Pains,
they are quite the same,
but of course, you won't know that...
but you'll observe and learn
and when it comes your turn
your cries won't be an act.
When your head gets cleared
from the pleasures here,
or... you are getting used to pain...
I'll just move you on to better things,
until I smell your fear again.
— themoonman, Oct 21, 2008
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Critiques
orgami
17 years 7 months ago
top hat and cane
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
O...
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Well, Richard
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Linda...
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Wanted...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Dude!
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Jess...
vonnegutfan
17 years 7 months ago
love It
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
vonnegutfan...
muttering_madwoman
17 years 7 months ago
yes!
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Fun...??????
muttering_madwoman
17 years 7 months ago
lol
shazbat
17 years 7 months ago
Wow, Richard this was
rainbow
17 years 6 months ago
That Sweet Smell.
Hooded Stranger
16 years 9 months ago
Oh yes
themoonman
16 years 9 months ago
H.S.
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Richard
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Richard