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Full Circle

If patience is a virtue
and hope lies beyond the door,
life just lies in waiting
so what are we waiting for?

I've let my only guard down
to those I'm vulnerable of,
afraid of getting stabbed
by a knife that's made of love.

Now I get the concept,
too bad not before;
you need not to go shoplifting
to find out what's in store.

So now I sit in resolute
discrepancies drawn,
scattered hopes and disappointments
strewn across the lawn.

Full circle this would bring me
while I try and make this rhyme,
we only count the grains of sand
when we're running out of time.
— docmaverick, Oct 21, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Doc

Wow those last two lines were awesome! How true. "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers