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The Midnight hour of all Souls Eve
Flaming eyes like fatal lighting bolts
A mouth that will swallow your very soul,
Along with him he brings gloom and doom
of the three none is bolder then he,
He has no heart to speak of,
all there is, is spine chilling icy cold,
In the deepest darkest places of your heart
and soul, he looms,
There he hides, always searching for souls,
be careful he's coming for yours soon!!
In The quick death he finds no joy, but prolonging
it is like a child's toy,
Fear, loss, pain, and regret are his children,
the ones he loves, his little boys,
When someone comes with fatal news,
right away fear takes hold,
then your hit with an earth shattering loss,
you can feel it down to your very soul,
Struck by pain, your world comes to a
screeching halt,
Why you ask, why could I not help the soul I have
always loved,
Regret comes and takes control of your mind and
soul,
The onslaught brought by these four threats has
opened the door for gloom and doom,
the flash of lighting with in his eyes signal of his
hope that you might take your own life,
Suddenly from somewhere deep in you, reason
takes charge like a loving wife,
Death let's out a spine chilling whale,
reason has saved another life,
Be sure when the darkest of your Midnight hours
comes, on all Souls Eve,
That you have packed your Reason, as you take
your leave!!
Critiques
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Wow
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
quite
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Wanted,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Who is "he"?
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Oh dear,
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Chrys,
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
Horror Fantacy
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Mark,
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Take your leave oh raison
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Anna,
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
hmmm ok will try
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Hi Eddie