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Part 2: A Damaged Brain Exposed


Part 2: A Damaged Brain Exposed


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O.W. Holmes: It is the province of knowledge
to speak and it is the privilege of wisdom
to listen.

Barbsdad: Well, maybe so ...

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All foregoing talkee-talkee énonciation
of mine in Part 1 assumes, of course,
an approximately perfect world where
a listener listens---

with honest hearing intended.

Paff!
An outrageously aughable lassumption.
A blankety-blank blinking pinball tilt.
Does not compute; it's theory.

A game.

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Wasn't it Shakespeare who iambic-
pentametered "let me borrow
your ears"? Or something like that?
                                                 ---barbsdad
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Listening can be pun to flay;
but for one motivated by the urge
of obligation to pretend, it can be
a bore, something tempting
attempted escape.

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It is the disease of not listening,
the malady of not marking, that I
am troubled with.
                                              ---Shakespeare
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Every listener, psudo or not, should
have at least one mental pireman's
fole

(and I think most of us do; we learned
it well at church and school)

to leap sideways onto and grab ahold
of while corkscrewing to rocky bottom,
and once there to busk unironed clothes
and hastily buit the quilding---

never wasting precious time inspecting
the mirror or combing hair or spreading
on antisperspirant or washragging face
or blowing nose or squeezing pimples.

Or clipping our nails.

(to be cont'd)

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Chuck

Damn missed part one, gotta trackback~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Chuck

all these are really good and I enjoyed they a lot. you are a talented writer. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Delightful Chuck

I san't cay si've een phis tut wis thay but it's gite quood. Dell wone! Enjoyed it. Respectfully, Rett: "Does this election remind you of The Emperors New Clothes? No one has the guts to tell him because..." Rett
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Chuck...

an escape route is always a good thing... enjoyed your play of words... Richard
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barbsdad2003

17 years 6 months ago

Thanx

I've gotta admit the original crafted with much more difficulty than the version I'm at the current time free-verse adapting/poeticizing for posting. Yours, Chuck
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 6 months ago

Part 2

Thank you for adapting the original to what we are now reading. These are truly inspiring pieces. ~ Ronda