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Random Thoughts

Sitting on the back porch swing
Looking at the midnight sky
Nothing but me and the stars
Remembered my youngest child

Asked me if God had to stand
On a chair to get the stars
Up so very high above
Pretty profound thought for a
Child of only four or so

Driving past a local church
That has a hundred or more
Tiny white crosses placed on
It's lawn in protest against
Abortion. It makes me cry

All those crosses for babies
Meant to be born, but were not
I guess the babies return
To God, sad they were not loved

I wonder too, who decides
Just who will be a beggar
And who will be royalty
Or whatever in between

I wonder where time has gone
And worry where it is going
I know that night time will fall
And day light always follows

Flowers bloom and rain does fall
Breezes blow, and sunshine warms
Birds fly above, sing their songs
Tides flow in without my help

I should leave the things of this
World to the All MIghty One
And worry myself not of
Things of which I do not know
— Linda Moses, Oct 18, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Linda

Indeed, there are quite a number of times when you just have to sit there and ask "why?" I know there's a reason for everything, but there are just some things that I feel have no justification to them whatsoever. Really liked this write, however, I did trip with the two 'nothings' so close to each other in the first stz. What about something like: Between the stars and I There was nothing. As I sat, and remembered my youngest child. Still keeps the same # of lines, yet solves two issues - me and the stars -> stars and I. And the two 'nothings'. But, it's only my opinion, maybe other people like your way better... dunno! :~) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"It is better to be thought of a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt..." - Mark Twain
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

I did note the two "nothing" together, and thought maybe it would fly. Removed the line for now as what I was trying to do was keep exactly 7 syllables per line through out the poem. I will have to think on it later, but I do appreaciate your comments and your help.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Random Thoughts

Linda, 5th line maybe the word asked, instead of ask just tripped me a little there Linda. This is a beauty~ Thanks for sharing! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Janice

Seems I had a lot of trouble with the grammar this time. Thank you for commenting and for your help. I made the appropriate change.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Linda

As it is write, let me carry your yoke! if a person with faith can believe that, their yoke does become lighter. Linda a wonderful write! Thanks, Eddie
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lionheart

17 years 7 months ago

Linda

Very awesome write. I like your thoughts. I like your style also. I understand you paint. That's great! I am also an artist. Keep on writing and painting. Lionheart