Are you ok?

Are you ok?
she asked, concerned,
after five hours of Tantric orgasm,
very.
not.
ok.
I groanasmed.
But then I wasn't before it started.

The shiatsu masseur said whooaaa what you been doing man?
your chakras smoking like a furnace man!
Would that have anything to do with Tantra?
I ask, a tad embarrassed.
He slapped his forehead,
oh you crazy kids!
It be worship man,
you send from Sahasrara to the universe,
not back to Swadhisthana,
that make screeching, smoking feedback man,
like rock n roll.

And it was good.

— weirdelf, Oct 17, 2008

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Critiques

yenti

17 years 7 months ago

OK

Used the Dictonary on this one as was worried about you there, still a couple of words can't find but will forgo those and go with the flow. If only you could bottle that, different read, but will say good write, with reservations, only on the fact that you pulled through the experience, so it aint harmful, LOL, Yours Ian.T

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

try wikipedia rather than dictionary

groanasmed is mine. Tantra- too much to summarise Sahasrara- the crown of the head chakra, gateway to the cosmos Swadhistha- chakra of sexuality Glad you liked it, cheers, Jess

barbsdad2003

17 years 7 months ago

I recognized your ...

home-groan groanasmed as your creation. Too bad the dictionary(ies) don't keep up with a Lotto current good lingo. I think your groanasmed ought to be let in (perhaps you/me could write our own (dictionary, that is); a publisher'd be a fool not to go for it). If no extant dictionary worth its weight picks it up---and includes it as a part of the English language---I'll hold less respect for them all. Kudos from me. Good write, this. I like how you're thinking. It appears your poeticity quotient's rising ... meaning, of course, not yet wholly risen. It's obvious your talents have elbow room yet to grow. A good thing, that. (I hold dear my own potential. After all, I don't want to use it all up.) I'm impressed. And I think a three-vote's not good enough. Yours, Chuck

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

thank you Chuck

I agree, a dictionary produced by you and me, is essential by the mere fact of its conception, however, would either of us survive the compilation? cheers, Jess

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

This is really good Jess

Having hailed from the home of Tantra, I could feel its power in your words. Especially: your chakras smoking like a furnace man! Leonard

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

ta Leonard

I assume you agree to let readers do their own research rather than try to summarise Tantra here? hint readers: don't forget the practicals. cheers, Jess

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Are you OK

hello Well some people never ever experience the wonders that are within and without of the body. To find the cosmos which is never ending. Enjoyed this write my friend. go for it. Electricblue