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Janice Pearce

Oct 15, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

White Corolla and Intersperse

~White Corolla~

Among the daisies
another chance at love,
a petal tumbles

~Intersperse~

A skipping stone splashes
crimson upon the palette
of autumn's lake

— Janice Pearce, Oct 15, 2008

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

I am overwhelmed by this write

This is beautiful!!!!! A petal tumbles... thats deep. A skipping stone splashes crimson............... You are one talented poet. I am speechless, I could read this over and over and I will sincerely, Patty

17 years 7 months ago

Patty

Now you're making me blush! Thank you sooo much~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

wow

The imagery in this is stunning! My only correction: skiping -> skipping. Other than that- perfect! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" - "Due to budget cutbacks, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off."

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

Thank you so much, it was early morn and then I lost the light at the end of the tunnel~ You just crack me up! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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purplemoondoll

17 years 7 months ago

Awesome poetry Janice.

Awesome poetry Janice. Stunning imagery. I really enjoyed reading this! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

17 years 7 months ago

Kaz

So glad you enjoyed these, makes my heart happy! What an adorable pup! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Another Two Gems

Hi Janice, I just just love them. So delicately written; so enchanting; so captivating. Leonard

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard

Your thoughts, always appreciated kind sir~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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17 years 7 months ago

Hi Janice

I do believe that you have swallowed a book of thoughts and great imagination Stunningly good,Brilliant...... Kindest Regards Peter 5*s from me ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~

17 years 7 months ago

Peter

Gulp, gulp [lol] I appreciate your kind thoughts, always! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

Janice,

another home run, damn girl this is so, so, good!! -A skipping stone splashes crimson upon the palette of autumn’s lake- great imagery! thanks, Eddie

17 years 7 months ago

Eddie

I am glad that you liked these and I appreciate your kind words. Of the two, that is also my favorite~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

Janice

really nice haiku Respectfully Yours, Barbara

17 years 7 months ago

Barbara

Thank you so much~ Appreciate your thoughts![beautiful picture of yourself] "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

Janice

Thanks Was in pain and sick when taking this. For My daughter's beauty class about two years ago. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

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17 years 7 months ago

I'd just ...

logged out. Then I spotted this. Outrageously beautiful. I join the chorus. Gladly. And now I log off. Again. Yours, Chuck

17 years 7 months ago

Chuck

Thank you for the great commnet! Appreciate it~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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17 years 7 months ago

Tantalisingly

tasteful work, a true spotlight piece-

17 years 7 months ago

pinksheep

Thank you! I appreciate that you stopped by,and your compliment~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

no freakin' way

great line from a movie and a great line to apply to you wonderous poems girl big smile from me

17 years 7 months ago

~O

Smiles back at you, my friend! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

AWesome!

That says it all! Respectfully, Rett: "We can all be thankful that Picasso wasn't a plastic surgeon." Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Rett

Your comment says it all! Glad you enjoyed these two Rett! Thank you so much~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

17 years 7 months ago

Janice...

your writing has become quite diverse... excellent! stunning imagery used in these two poems... Richard

17 years 7 months ago

Richard

Thank you for reading these two, and commenting. I appreciate it Moon! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Janice

I came across this in the stream so my work is done for the day. I know this is in the spotlight, so congrats! I just love your portrait of images you have the gift to describe with words that take me somewhere happy with no thoughts of worldly problems. Patty

17 years 7 months ago

Patty

Yes, we all need a break from the madness~ Nature will bring us there in words or visits. Thank you Patty! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

souls of stones

exposed like lovers bones and honey eyes old and worn by times talented hands ghost faded with tales to tell hold them sacred breath a prayer release them to the sunken lair of the water mistress O

17 years 7 months ago

~O

I look forward to reading you responses, because they are poetry lines that touch my soul. There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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17 years 7 months ago

This

title is magificient and what follows is really sublime, a dream on the silk of a moths' wing that is what this poem is-

17 years 7 months ago

pinksheep

a dream on the silk of a moth's wing hmmmm the start of a great poem for you! What a beautiful comment, thanks pink~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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17 years 7 months ago

The

start of a poem inspired by you , thankyou Janice-

17 years 7 months ago

pink

he he he can't wait to see how it turns out~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers