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Oct 12, 2008
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My Insignificant Place
Dancing by the Hudson on this
beautiful Autumn day,
The murky waters of the River
flow with memories of
yesterday.
Memories of leaping from the
piers with my friends of
yesteryear's.
The happy time of fun and
laughter, never thinking ahead
living with out fear.
Today I dance alone, the River
invokes those memories of my
youthful years.
Memories cascading upon me
that bring those happy tears.
The times I peered into the abyss,
without realizing the dangers
that where so very near
I never thought that these
insignificant things would seem
so dear.
But I feel great joy to have them
seared to memories that have
not been misplaced
Thank you Great River for your
strength, and to know I'll never
lose this place.
beautiful Autumn day,
The murky waters of the River
flow with memories of
yesterday.
Memories of leaping from the
piers with my friends of
yesteryear's.
The happy time of fun and
laughter, never thinking ahead
living with out fear.
Today I dance alone, the River
invokes those memories of my
youthful years.
Memories cascading upon me
that bring those happy tears.
The times I peered into the abyss,
without realizing the dangers
that where so very near
I never thought that these
insignificant things would seem
so dear.
But I feel great joy to have them
seared to memories that have
not been misplaced
Thank you Great River for your
strength, and to know I'll never
lose this place.
— Eduardo Cruz, Oct 12, 2008
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Critiques
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Linda
Constantinos G…
17 years 7 months ago
Nice work
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Tino,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Like the quirk rhyme and repetition,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
oomgh,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
the avatar is a rendering of Dhubain
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
If I find religion while I'm drunk, is that god?
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Nice Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you,