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Lying Still
Lying still his
Body blankly waiting,
All better possibilities removed,
Discarded with the clothing.
Nothing left but
barren elemental acts,
With thinking chained to physic bits
Of skinscaped geographic facts.
Staging motion by the script
When emotion has now fled
There’s left a mere performance;
Not-bad acting playing in its stead.
Forgetting when,
over , done, and filled with doubt,
That the charge, not the parts
Brings ecstasy about.
Wanting by itself
Is insufficient reason.
Being attended by affection
Pleasures me to please him.
Reached for by attraction
Brings alive my blood
In all the tips where there without,
Passion cannot flood.
We’re better joined by hearts and minds
Which all the rest will follow,
Than trying only our skins to join
When under them is hollow.
Critiques
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
A.W.
orgami
17 years 7 months ago
this is so stark and wonderful
ArrowWords
17 years 7 months ago
From MindScreen to Mind?