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Blue Angel

A rush of feather-sinewed limbs brought him to your side, your brightest wing-furled shadow where no demon could find the ghost-troubled mind on your sleep-torn pillow.   He was the blue inside your heart, stretched soft around your pearl where others had torn apart with careless or greedy abuse the true message of your heart, written when love was new and still perfect in its conception.   He lay with you on obsidian sheets of  wave-sculpted rock until your dream was almost real. But now alone, sea-embraced

in the cold nerveless fingers

of one last blue-streaked dawn, the flinted knife of sacrifice has emptied his angel’s heart so yours can go on, with only memory beating what should have been.   Blood seeping warmth into each unguarded moment’s crevice, a lingering, splintered death

whose  thorn outlived the rose

as love’s shrivelled roots dessicate the sap of petal-strewn beds where once we lay our stems inseparable. Now stilled life crushed beneath the careless brush of each forgetting stoke our souls divided by the knife on death’s palette.  
— professor, Oct 12, 2008

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Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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rider68

17 years 8 months ago

Awesome writing

Keith I really engaged with these woven words to which you have portrayed.. very provoking heartfelt, it's become a constant challenge to find something new to say, i suppose beautiful.....is just as good, 5*s from me...... Respectfully Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Blue Angel

Hi Keith A beautiful poem to send you into dreams. I too have written a poem call Blue angel but that is me. electricblue
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

Thankyou Maggie

I guess that makes two of us then for i am called Blue Angel as well lol.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Keith

No flaws here! Congrats on the Evolution slot. I'm at a loss for words. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"So you stand on the corner in your new English clothes, and you look so polished from your hair down to your toes. Ah, but still your finger's gonna pick your nose after all." - Billy Joel
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

Lost for words?

Not like you Jess lol. Thanks as always for your kind comments and congrats. Keith
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Keith

Good poem, pulled me and and almost made me cry... Congrats. patty
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Keith

Once again, another great write. I truly enjoyed reading this over, and over~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Janice

Flattery indeed and i hope it seemed better with each repetition lol. Keith
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

It is a sad story

I admit although i am not sure whether i am happy or not that it made you weep lol. Thanks for saying how much it moved you.
professor

professor

17 years 7 months ago

In that case

i am of course happy and thankyou for the picture. Blue Angel