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Oct 12, 2008
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Blue Angel
A rush of feather-sinewed limbs brought him to your side, your brightest wing-furled shadow where no demon could find the ghost-troubled mind on your sleep-torn pillow. He was the blue inside your heart, stretched soft around your pearl where others had torn apart with careless or greedy abuse the true message of your heart, written when love was new and still perfect in its conception. He lay with you on obsidian sheets of wave-sculpted rock until your dream was almost real. But now alone, sea-embraced
in the cold nerveless fingers
of one last blue-streaked dawn, the flinted knife of sacrifice has emptied his angel’s heart so yours can go on, with only memory beating what should have been. Blood seeping warmth into each unguarded moment’s crevice, a lingering, splintered deathwhose thorn outlived the rose
as love’s shrivelled roots dessicate the sap of petal-strewn beds where once we lay our stems inseparable. Now stilled life crushed beneath the careless brush of each forgetting stoke our souls divided by the knife on death’s palette.— professor, Oct 12, 2008
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rider68
17 years 8 months ago
Awesome writing
professor
17 years 8 months ago
You are too kind Peter
Electric Blue
17 years 7 months ago
Blue Angel
professor
17 years 7 months ago
Thankyou Maggie
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Keith
professor
17 years 7 months ago
Lost for words?
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Keith
professor
17 years 7 months ago
Only "almost" Patty
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Keith
professor
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Janice
professor
17 years 7 months ago
It is a sad story
professor
17 years 7 months ago
In that case