Janice Pearce

Oct 11, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dance, Symphony, Glimpses Of The Inner Eye

The Following were composed By:

~Leonard Daranjo and Janice Pearce~
Dance

Inside an old barn
shadows play the violin
for dancing field mice

Symphony

Only my footsteps
the sound of cicadas
in orchestration

Glimpses Of The Inner Eye

The night rests its
underbelly on the grass,
it's neck stretched upwards

— Janice Pearce, Oct 11, 2008

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Critiques

themoonman

17 years 8 months ago

All right now

now I'm jealous... lol.. really the two of you are very good together... wonderful images composed here... ya'll should collaborate more often... Richard

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Moon

This was such fun. Leonard had me putting my thinking cap on, and hopefully I had him putting his on too! Thank you for the kind words! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

weirdelf

17 years 8 months ago

Goddam you to hell!

After "Light's Painting" I had my cynical eye on you two, reading this, then broke into an irresistible grin. Bloody good work... although not quite sure of the attempts to portentousness with the oneliners. cheers, Jess

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Jess

Thanks for stopping by Jess! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

"God damn you to hell"

is an expression of envy, please don't take it in a critical context. cheers, Jess

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

Nice…. poetic partnership.

Nice.... poetic partnership. Congrats you two. (it's should be its) ~A

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

~A

Thank you Anna. We appreciate you thoughts and edited it. "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

prayersbyPatty

17 years 8 months ago

You two may have started a trend

This is beautiful, awesome, (Patty throws rainbows) I love barns, violins, mice You want the raw truth........ You two knocked me on my back ***** Dancing field mice, a symphony of a co-written masterpiece. Orchestrated in harmony. Patty

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Patty

Thank you Patty, gee I thought we'd get you dancing! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

prayersbyPatty

17 years 8 months ago

Jan

I dance quietly to the words I sing to God and am much happier the last dance I had did not end well. My son plays violin and I could listen for hours... Patty

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

The are beautiful

Smiles:) Barbara Not sure I understand the inner eye part, either way it is well written. Two is better that one was wonderfully displayed here in true poetry

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Barbara

We apreciate your thoughts. Thank you so very much! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 8 months ago

Janice,

I love that last stanza, great imagery. Congrats to you both. this was smooth as silk! Thanks, Eddie

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Eddie

Thank you so very much,glad that you enjoyed them! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

prayersbyPatty

17 years 8 months ago

One of these days Jan

I am going to write one of these haiku but now that I see the WOW of putting them together I am in awe.... Patty

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Patty

We are glad that you enjoyed them, we sure enjoyed putting them together! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

whitetea

17 years 7 months ago

>

perfect word choice, not a single neutral word. wow

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

whitetea

Thank you, so very much! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Did I tell you both what are

Did I tell you both what are great collaboration U2 make? A lovely stream. ~A

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

~A

We both thank you for the compliment! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

pinksheep

17 years 7 months ago

This

poem that you tell me is written in a Japanese form is dynamism itself created upon the static screen-thankyou-

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

pinksheep

We appreciate you comments! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

pinksheep

17 years 7 months ago

I

see now looking over the 3 stanzas are written in 5-7-5-cheers-

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

pinksheep

Cheers back at you ~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Divena

We appreciate that you stopped by to read, and your kind comments! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers