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Airplane

Airplane Nighttime in Cleveland and who knows; ten - thousand, twenty - five thousand a hundred thousand feet up is a flickering light. At this distance down I don't know if this is a commercial airline, or something small and fragile. Maybe it's military, or the space station, hurtling through orbit. It turns out the Hubble's broken. There's no money to fix it. Tell me where's the tragedy in this. Oh, I love space, and exploration. And I love my fellow man; but I've been waiting for this day when the crash would begin like an airplane's engines failing falling, from stratospheric heights, from the top of the tower of Babel. Can we learn a lesson? Greed kills, greed it; our way of life, the motor stops, the lights go out, electrical failure - oxygen masks descend in first class. Where's the anger, the action, the rolling of heads? Where's the indignation, resignation, the furor? Dehr Fuehrer his fervor it's on the street in the whitest mansions in Washington and New York. Stutter stall spin tank and a loud screeching noise. The faithful and the masses and the huddled few left. Who shall be saved? Glory to God a hundred thousand feet up.
— Conect11, Oct 10, 2008

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

Cleveland is a way station

Cleveland is a way station between the emptiness of God and the fulfillment of greedy mouths.... stay with me awhile....let us breathe the pure oxygen high atop Arunachala, before the mast was broken on our craft, before the subscription to Time ended. ~A Nice to meet your acquaintance. I live in Ohio. How quaint!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

Mark

The crash has certainly begun. I don't think the "oxygen masks" came in enough time, though. Well thought out write, here. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" - "Due to budget cutbacks, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off."
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Conect11

17 years 8 months ago

I'd agree

about the crash having already begun. I'd say the oxygen masks will (as is typical) get handed to the super wealthy (ie, the bailout) and you and I shall be once again stuck with the bill. Let them eat cake, truly. Mark W. P.S. I snickered like a little maniac at your light at the end of the tunnel sign off.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 8 months ago

I love the levelling.

And hear great thirst for a non-existent natural justice. But any mention of Babel inflames my anti-christian outrage nearly as much as original sin. What a petty, spiteful, insecure, jealous god would do the Babel thing, or original sin, which is like administering a poison and making the antidote conditional. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

17 years 8 months ago

ah dear Babel!

perhaps Babel to you is as insulting as "how quaint" is to me :) Remeber that man was attempting to do on Earth what Lucifer did in Heaven, which led to the great war on God. God was merely protecting His territory, and man along with it. Mark