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Nature Mithya
Oct 10, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lured Tenderness

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— Nature Mithya, Oct 10, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

The vampire was impaled with

The Vampire was impaled with sunlight and so turned to dust his bride walked through the corridors of temptation she wanted his lust and all she had was blood dripping from a rose. ~A
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Nature Mithya

17 years 8 months ago

True English is not my mother tongue.

It may surprise you that i think our my poems in English. Lol Never heard the comments you have made. Well they are an eye opener for me and I must congratulate on you perceptions. Never bind my self to any form I think. Anyway, to understand the poem it would be best if you look at the link I have mentioned in my comments above. Then maybe you change your opinion. Moreover as for lycan, dragon, merge shape-shifters in stealth, vampires they are written for contests as per need. Can follow link below for more deeper understanding. View my poetry at Allpoetry By the way I am not good at Hindi.Just English for me.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 7 months ago

Lol

Let me tell you a joke. Two boys at school: one good in English the other nil. The first always putting down the other for his lacking. The second one thought to correct the first, learns two words 'Come Here' i.e. to call some one near you. Seeing the first boy he calls our 'come here'. Taken aback the first says you learn English very fast. To test, he tells the second boy pointing to a far table; tell me to go to the table, in just two words. The second boy taken aback, suddenly laughing goes to the table to call out 'come here' In short Communication is an art not bound by and language, barrier or tough word phrases: Like Love it is free only to be understood.So never care for hard and fast rules.