The Moonlight Climbed The Stairs With Me

That is what poetry does to the mind. It fills one with hope for the new dawn. Congrats.

upbeat ending ... so rich with promise. moonlight climbed the stairs with me followed me into bed, I've not thought of being stalked by moonlight. This says it well. Adroitly. all alone was I no one shared my pillow no one shared my dreams, Nice continuation from the opening lines. Seamless. Almost achingly so. Thanx, Chuck

What a great thought.... Being stalked by moonlight.... I guess we really are. I think this one could use some tweaking. I have not voted yet. will revisit later Patty

poem is fine, a small gift as if found in a peach stone, like a miniature mythical child , a wonder- my regards to you-pinksheep

Is this Gordon Lightfoot's counterpart? "Sundown, you better take care, if I find you a-creepin' 'round my back stairs...." "Moonbeam, you better take care, if I find you a-creepin' up my house stairs..." Awesome write - though I find moonbeam sometimes lays on that pillow with me. You're not always alone. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" - "Due to budget cutbacks, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off."

Smiles:) Barbara lovely poem as usual your poems are very poetic in tone and paints a beautiful picture in a magical way.

your Poems always stay with me, they have beautiful lasting feelings. thanks, Eddie

The moonlight climbed the stairs with me, an awesome lead into a beautiful poem! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

the word hope comes to mind when i read this. i am not sure why. loved this.