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Oct 08, 2008
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Sonnet 20
The longing for my beauty bends a lot
Those saddened bones I have to carry straight;
From legs to brain in pieces they will rot -
With helpless stanzas you'll confound my weight.
It's hard, you know... the gape devours my soul
When I confront the brightness of your eyes
And I shall dwell in darkness like a mole
That fights the sun until the fighter dies.
Be praised in life and glorified in death
Your voice, your face, your deepness and your light
That bursts illusions from your flaming breath
And swims in twilight towards me, tonight.
Grow like a flower in my heart and stay,
Not in this world to whom you'll be astray.
Those saddened bones I have to carry straight;
From legs to brain in pieces they will rot -
With helpless stanzas you'll confound my weight.
It's hard, you know... the gape devours my soul
When I confront the brightness of your eyes
And I shall dwell in darkness like a mole
That fights the sun until the fighter dies.
Be praised in life and glorified in death
Your voice, your face, your deepness and your light
That bursts illusions from your flaming breath
And swims in twilight towards me, tonight.
Grow like a flower in my heart and stay,
Not in this world to whom you'll be astray.
— Unlight, Oct 08, 2008
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Sheherazade
17 years 8 months ago
Lovely conclusion :). Just
Unlight
17 years 8 months ago
Yes, I’ll put “the
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
By god you are a master of this form,
Unlight
17 years 7 months ago
Jess, thanks for your
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I don't often comment on your works
Mason King
17 years 7 months ago
An Awesome Sonnet,
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
A wonderful sonnet