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Oct 07, 2008
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erasing passive
I won't
be someones secret to unlock
not a fear tucked into a back pocket
of denium jeans
unworn for 13 years
for some buyer at the thrift store to
hang back up after seeing the holes
I will be
the grafiti, neon
a reminder of a local gang
no one will bust
on the billboard advertising
shave cream
in a city that is familiar
with crime and crooked and
slow police
you won't notice this
on the drive to work toward
the onramp
but it will be there, speaking itself
over and through.
be someones secret to unlock
not a fear tucked into a back pocket
of denium jeans
unworn for 13 years
for some buyer at the thrift store to
hang back up after seeing the holes
I will be
the grafiti, neon
a reminder of a local gang
no one will bust
on the billboard advertising
shave cream
in a city that is familiar
with crime and crooked and
slow police
you won't notice this
on the drive to work toward
the onramp
but it will be there, speaking itself
over and through.
— whitetea, Oct 07, 2008
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Critiques
Arrow
17 years 8 months ago
Great piece.
whitetea
17 years 7 months ago
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Arrow
17 years 7 months ago
I think your current title
leonard daranjo
17 years 8 months ago
This is a nice piece
whitetea
17 years 7 months ago
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Lenny of Cohen
17 years 8 months ago
Loved this
whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
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Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
erasing passive
whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
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orgami
17 years 8 months ago
nice piece
whitetea
17 years 7 months ago
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themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Whitney...
whitetea
17 years 7 months ago
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