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Oct 07, 2008
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Separation
Come loneliness and press
yourself against my bosom,
Take the life within me and
stop it's course,
Let the darkness over take me,
and bleed me of all my loss,
Is it not easier to give up than
to put up a fight,
Adversary come now, I am here
with open arms,
Fare in hand, he waits for me
upon the River Styx"s,
He stands there on the bank
and will not cross until we meet,
Come now, while I am weak, and
like a child listening to a lullaby
I will fall asleep,
to awaken with my love,
upon the River Styx"s
yourself against my bosom,
Take the life within me and
stop it's course,
Let the darkness over take me,
and bleed me of all my loss,
Is it not easier to give up than
to put up a fight,
Adversary come now, I am here
with open arms,
Fare in hand, he waits for me
upon the River Styx"s,
He stands there on the bank
and will not cross until we meet,
Come now, while I am weak, and
like a child listening to a lullaby
I will fall asleep,
to awaken with my love,
upon the River Styx"s
— Eduardo Cruz, Oct 07, 2008
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Critiques
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Excellent write Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Rett,
leonard daranjo
17 years 8 months ago
Great write Eduardo
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Leo,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Jess,
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie I like this poem
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Patty,