A Talking Something

I have waited long enoughI always wait patiently,And anxiously in this cosmosYou’re now wholly oblivious of natureIn the world you traversed from Now relax or panicWhile I walk through thingsAbstract, happening in this realmThat you alone knowAnd don’t understand See fantasies and enjoyFeel fear and endureBut in all these, widen your sight,Behind the clouds of abstractnessA vast heaven of visions See me weird in the shadowsBut build me right in the day’s meadowsWhen the birds whistle is realElse I will hunt you Even in the days Man, I am somethingIndescribable… So you can call me anythingLike a talking somethingIn dreams, visions and nightmares

— WonderGolly, Oct 06, 2008

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Region, Country: Volta / GH, GHA

Favorite Poets: Kofi Awoonor, Kofi Anyidoho, ... :(

Critiques

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

This one may be just too vague Golly

I never understood the gist of what you were trying to say or if you were trying to say something. It has a good flow, but for me, no understanding. Sorry. Respectfully, Rett: "We can all be thankful that Picasso wasn't a plastic surgeon." Rett

WonderGolly

17 years 8 months ago

Rett....

thanks for stopping by to read. I appreciate it. No need to be sorry. "A Talking Something" is a voice from the land of unknown. It's talking to you about SOMETHING, EVERYTHING or even NOTHING. so which ever portion you choose make sense to me. I appreciate your honesty. And I would like your comment about my poem entitled "The Different Us" yet to be posted. Best wishes. Wonder.

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

I think I get where you're going with this,

and well done, it would have been easy to make the mistake of being pretentiously obscure, just enough hints of the ineffable to tantalise, cheers, Jess

WonderGolly

17 years 7 months ago

cheers,

I admire the way you always walk your mind through obscure things and however vague they may seem, you find your way out. I will honour you with the title "RIDDLE MANSTER" I appreciate your stopping by to read. catch you soon. Best wishes. Wonder.